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writefirstdraftDavid Strahan@writefirstdraft·
24 May

This is what's known as a non-denial denial. Nowhere does No 10 rebut the substantive allegations. Then it goes all ad-hominem attack. Rattled. As it should be.

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writefirstdraftDavid Strahan@writefirstdraft·
22 Apr

Pity the mandarin forced to lie by his political masters. The clue's in the language. The letter is clear, even elegant, until this passive, negative howler: "a political decision was not taken on whether or not to participate". They clearly had his arm up his back.

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writefirstdraftDavid Strahan@writefirstdraft·
2 Apr

"Wigstand". Outstanding!

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writefirstdraftDavid Strahan@writefirstdraft·
26 Mar

Clear explainer of the modelling of COVID-19 https://t.co/VcvkbEGZ5s via @ConversationUK

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writefirstdraftDavid Strahan@writefirstdraft·
23 Dec

To all @writefirstdraft alumni, this is an excellent example of the "slap". Now apply to an opening para on astrophysics!

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